I will be going through my manuscript looking for errors in the above elements: spelling, grammar, syntax, and conciseness. So if I send you a copy of my story to read, and you find any glaring errors, please, please send me an alert. I will be ever so grateful. And you'll get to read my story for free!
I'm rather proud of my story. I know there are areas where it needs work, more descriptive work in some areas, POV jumps, and changing passive verbs to active ones. And probably others that I haven't caught yet.
Why didn't I just change those things while I was writing? That is simple. I've tried that method before, and it bogged me down so much that I forgot what the main character was trying to do, and eventually just gave up. I've had that happen in at least five different stories. I hope to go back to each one and complete it, but right now, I just want to get this one published and in its best form.
I know everyone is very busy, and I respect that. But if you can just review one chapter for me, that will be a great help. So, if you read this post, and have a few minutes to spare, please contact me by email at dmbarnes@twinvalley.net, and I'll send you my first chapter. If you wish to read more, let me know. I will be so grateful.
Thank you.
Dixie
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